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Detention
by Ana Flávia
Around 4 years as a hobbyist
Worked a bit on it each day throught the month
A girl gets into detention, I wonder what she's done this time...
Comments
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RajBis
nice
John Alston
The animation is consistently fluid, and what would easily be a flaw (excessive showiness) is complimented with simulated camera movement and subtle "rack focus."
Jackson VonMinden
love this animation! my pick for the winner this month
Raya
Looks good. Lip Sing not sync with the dialogue.
Thomas Yi
This is so cute! Spinning around in a chair is a really creative way to express the "lah di dah". I think the camera shots are done really well, and that change of focus at 75 is excellent! My only suggestion is that you get some text on that detention board at the beginning... Why is this character in detention? What did they say for them to be speaking this audio? But this is amazing!
Melanie Corrales
I love this! The angle changes, the fluidity of the animation, the emotions and expressions on your character. Well done!