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drunk teen

by ayush raizada

Final Rating: 4.32. Finished #98 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

ayush raizada

Experience

not much

Time Taken

did not get much time that is why it is not complete

Description

teen comes after late night party by climbing the wall....and security guard finds out

Comments

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zac

Some good weight and poses here, Had you gotten the chance to get it out of stepped and finish it I might have rated a bit higher, but it's a very good blocking pass

Jason C

need to finish it. your start is really nice. only thing is the ending i'm not sure if he is looking at her but or her face .

Cuck Man

Would be better if it were finished.
Story is also a bit confusing.

Aanal Kumar

could have been awasom!!!!

Jack Kimberley

Good work on blocking, would have been really good with a bit of polish.

Jesse J. Jones

Great work! I love the dynamic of the two characters, it really feels like there's a lot of weight between them. Great job! Funny too! :)

Gary

A really fun idea. I wish it were finished.

Christian

Very nice effort, it's a shame you weren't able to finish off the last half, because I can clearly see you were on track for a very solid animation.

Kristin Turnipseed

Not bad, and nice idea, looks like you could use just a little more time to finish it.

Aaron Rivera

Even though some inbetweens are missing, the movement is on the right track. I'd love to see it completed sometime.

Bailey Easson

The story is good and the key poses are on the right track. Once it's smoothed out it'll be great!