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getting caught
by Gary
Mary goes into the head office to steal top secret information, and got caught by her colleague.
Comments
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Jesse J. Jones
Very floaty, it almost looks like they're underwater. Work on your timing.
Gary
The hard work is noticeable in a longer submission. The acting choices are good. After the man touches her, all the motion seems slow like it's under water or something. It's nice and smooth, but maybe let the characters reach pose faster and hold it a little longer.
Rob Cavallo
too much in the beginning and the animation is a bit floaty. Not a bad job just needs some more work
Hannah Benbow
I'd work on your timing a bit, everything feels like its moving in slow motion.