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The Secret
Will Spy keep the secret of Fem Sniper's little betrayal? The answer next week in Team Fortress Noir!
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philipp seis
maybe a bit too snappy
donna
Love the staging!
Zacary Hutchinson
Nice lighting and the animation is pretty nice too.
Michael D. Smith
Nice. Using source filmmaker I'm guessing? Liked the lighting at the end.
Jesse J. Jones
Great staging! I love the drama! Only critique I would have is I feel the woman's first head movement happens a few frames after the audio accent. Really terrific work here! :)
Cuck Man
Nice camera angles. Just improve on that animation and you got a winner
Daniel Vasconcellos
cool characters, nice cameras!
Danny Kneip
Crazy style and angles! The blocking is good overall, but I don't believe he got to that doorway by 241 when he just passed in front of her at 229. His lip sync is stronger than hers. With some polishing, I think it's a really good piece for your portfolio!
Gary
I dig the style you're going for, especially the last shot. The man moves well in his scenes, but the woman seems to stop suddenly into her poses. Give her head a little settle into each pose.
Dan Harriman
Final shot is great! Good casting of rigs for both characters. 2nd last shot jolts the whole piece though.. if it was tighter and had less of a Dutch angle I think it wouldn't be distracting
Abhik Paul
nice render