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Hairy dinner
by Mallo Ryker
The enemy caught a little detail.
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philipp seis
nice idea !
Danny Kneip
Really great and amusing set up. The lip sync is quite weak but there is great potential here! I love that he leaves the hair on the plate! Keep polishing this!
Mattie Walsh
The movement of the characters is quite nice. You need to sell the dialogue more. Open the characters' mouths move, show greater contrast in mouth shapes
Sajjad Afzal
lip sync need improvement
Eric Buval
The chef could've used a bit more facial action at the end of that closeup
Kristin Turnipseed
I like the poses, but the face feels really stiff. Try loosening it up and really pushing those mouth shapes. Nice work
Clement
Good staging and framing! The two first shots are good. Good rythm and poses during the close-up. Too bad such an heavy and imposing character ends up being really rigid with its animation showing no weight (especially when he stands straight).
Aaron Rivera
I love the framing at the end, but I feel like there could be more expression in this one. Pushing the eyebrows and tightening the movement would've went a long way. This is solid work though.
Jesse J. Jones
What is he looking at in the last scene? The screen direction is confusing here, it just looks like he's looking at the floor when we saw her to screen right of him.
Dan Harriman
Idea was clearly portrayed!
Blond
Rattatouille 2?
J.K. Riki
That's a fun concept! :)