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Blackmail
by Jon Hillyer
This character has some things to think about.
Comments
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Jacob Moreno
Not bad. The animation seems a bit floaty. Try to add variation in the timing (rather than a, a, a) try (a, aa, a, aaa, etc.). Think of a metronome and the poses as the beats of it. This might help. Nice work.
Kimberly Wilkie
The facial animation is really nice, but try not to hold poses like you did at the beginning. He looks completely frozen and it doesn't feel right. Add a blink or two and some very subtle head/hand/body movements to keep the character alive. I also feel like when he's bringing his hands together, the action should be a bit quicker.
But overall, nice job!
Jesse J. Jones
Pretty floaty. Work on timing. Eyes drift around fr. 118.
Monika G
The eyelids feel dead, more movement together with the brows would have been nice