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the guilt thingy :/

by berre

Final Rating: 3.54. Finished #140 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

berre

Experience

i'm a student XD

Time Taken

24h+-

Description

dont know what to say :s
first time i do this XD
started way to late :3
i'm somewhat happy with it :p

Comments

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Michael D. Smith

Blink!

Danny Kneip

He really doesn't appear to be looking at her once leaning forward around 223. The lip sync and movement need quite a bit of polishing, but it's a good attempt nonetheless.

Mattie Walsh

Reference this to get those shoulders happening.

Jesse J. Jones

Body stays still while arm moves on its own, making it feel very unnatural like you're just dragging IK handles around. Try animating the basics like a walk first to get an idea of how our bodies motivate our arm and leg movements.

Edward Chris Evjen

Don't hide the man behind the lamp. The lady is distracting.