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The Warning
by Barry Rowan
Description
He doesn't like to be played, and he makes that perfectly clear.
Comments
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J.K. Riki
The fan in the first shot is a nice little "world" touch but it's extremely distracting because it's moving more than anything else in the shot. Either put it more on screen and slow it down or lose it completely. Good luck with future entries!