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Don't eat the cookies

by Phil

Final Rating: 3.20. Finished #164 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

Phil

Experience

Beginner

Time Taken

6 hours

Description

A young woman and a man are talking about an incident. It looks like the woman has committed a big crime but in the end (which isn't shown in this animation) she has only eaten some cookies

Comments

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Jesse J. Jones

Composition is unbalanced, there's a lot of empty space screen left. Also, get those hands out of the neutral pose! :)