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An Affair to Forget

by Brooke Wagstaff

Final Rating: 6.46. Finished #19 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

Brooke Wagstaff

Experience

4 Years

Time Taken

1.5 weeks

Description

Modified Bonnie Rig ©Josh Sobel. Modified Malcolm Rig courtesy of AnimSchool.com

(Oops--next time I'll pay better attention to the final output size so you don't need a magnifying glass. Thanks for looking!)

Comments

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Elliot

Love this one, the lighting ,composition and woman animation are perfect! Just a shame it's difficult to see the mans animation. Perhaps it needed a cut to close or pan in here? just a thought. Great work though!

Wei Wang

the staging could be better, cant see face on the male

Jesse J. Jones

Nice subtlety! I think I would like to see more reaction in the girl's face, but that's my preference. Really great job! :)

Daniel Vasconcellos

Cool idea and setup!

Roger Crown

Close up on the guy saying the end line......where is my CLOSEUP...........hhrrrrrmmmmm...????????

Nawaz

Very nice subtle movements. The turn by the woman could've been smoother. Overall the mood is great!

Valentious Williams

lovely great ,feels like a film noir done well. Man i love this one ,subt;e and to the point .

Gary

Uncommon in this month's submissions that the woman's acting outshines the man's. Great subtlety in that.

Bailey Easson

I really like this. The animation is well done and the monochromatic theme fits the mood. The main thing bothering me is that after Her movements are very nicely done, she's a statue at the end. If she could move some it would give it just a tad more life.

Martin Gil

great!, that man is an asshole!

Avinash Kharat

good one