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One way or another...

by Arik R. Morales IV

Final Rating: 3.32. Finished #155 out of 197 entries.

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Experience

As a student learning it, a few months.

Time Taken

Many, many hours.

Description

The first 3D animation I've done as of yet that I feel the most happy with. But I still have a lot to learn.

Any and all critique is welcome!

Comments

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Jacob Moreno

Not bad. My advice would be to eliminate so many intricacies between poses. For example the way the girl's hand movements move in a bunch of different directions from point a (holding the man's arm) to point b (clenching her own hands). try to focus on transitions, I feel like that would help the animation a lot. Interesting camera work too. Keep it up!

Jesse J. Jones

A lof of floatyness going on. Work on your weight and timing. There's also a big pop in the beginning.