« Back to May 2014 Competition
One way or another...
As a student learning it, a few months.
Many, many hours.
The first 3D animation I've done as of yet that I feel the most happy with. But I still have a lot to learn.
Any and all critique is welcome!
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Jacob Moreno
Not bad. My advice would be to eliminate so many intricacies between poses. For example the way the girl's hand movements move in a bunch of different directions from point a (holding the man's arm) to point b (clenching her own hands). try to focus on transitions, I feel like that would help the animation a lot. Interesting camera work too. Keep it up!
Jesse J. Jones
A lof of floatyness going on. Work on your weight and timing. There's also a big pop in the beginning.





