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Magic cheese.
He was delicious ...
He did not notice ...
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zac
Your last pose could use some retooling, The speaking character on the right, who's voice sounds more confident and in control is in a submissive pose, while the left character has a more dominating stance. It doesn't quite match how the dialog is spoken.
James
The last pose seems like he's scared instead of conniving.
Roger Crown
The dog/bear character should push into the lion character to reinforce what the line is.....
So why are your lines so sketchy.....
On the mouse/bat character his new big ears should POP out and be there with squash and strech for the end deployment of said ears....
Patrick Stelmach
The female seems very static while the male is talking, maybe she should react more to what he's saying.
Jesse J. Jones
Pose on the screen right right seems odd. Probably needs a better silhouette. Good work though! :)
Benjamin Berg
Looks good. There are two things I'll mention though. 1st. The animation feels a little floaty or too slow in places. Example: [Frames 150- 175 on the right character] [Frames 330-356 on the left character] 2nd. It looks partially incomplete and could use some more time smoothing everything out.
Aaron Rivera
Very nice! I feel like some frames are missing here and there but the movement is all great. With those frames this could've made the top 11, though I hope it still will. Great job regardless!
Matthew Dobrez
the characters look like Wallace and Gromit style... very cool.