Dave's Cake

Cory Parks

I think you wanted to do too many poses. You should consider going simpler next time. Nice Blender cup though :P

Cuck Man

Wayyyyyy too many things going on at once. And what was with the Blender cup??

Jack Kimberley

You're the best

Danny Kneip

Team Blender!!! :D nice, creepy performances. Her opening line seems extremely rushed but her reactions are priceless! His lip sync needs some polish. Just a crazy, fun entry that spices up the competition!! :D

Aaron Rivera

very funny with great expressions, but I think a lot of the movements are too jerky, even for an exaggerated style like this.

Jesse J. Jones

Great! Loved that you were able to get that selfie shot in there, made me laugh! :) My general critique would be that some of the actions like him sitting down and her reacting to him happen so fast that they don't really have a chance to read and become strobe-y. Would like to see her notice him first, she seems to have eyes in the back of her head to know he's there. Really good work though!

Gary

Your ideas are a lot of fun and I like your poses. The man's entrance and exit is a lot fun. I just wish the flow between the poses were more smooth and connected. Some of the limbs seem to have a mind of their own at Times. I enjoy the energetic motion, just smooth out the transitions.

Menga Nkouka

the man moves too fast, the action is not clear. The woman's expressions are clearly understantable. Like the render