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will you ?

by Arpit Jain

Final Rating: 2.37. Finished #196 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

Arpit Jain

Experience

freasher

Time Taken

10 days

Description

conversation between two people..... one is sitting on the chair with a suspicious grin.. other stand behind him troubled.

Comments

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Mattie Walsh

Reference would be your friend

Jesse J. Jones

Not really any acting going on here. Try going back to practicing the basics.

Aaron Rivera

There appears to be no interaction between the characters, which is a huge missed opportunity with this audio. The expressions and poses don't change much either. She could've at least looked at him once, or he could've turned a bit to gesture at or look at her, but here the connection is only in audio.