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by Katie Spell
A girl wants her friend’s opinion on a love poem that she wrote for a boy she likes. The poem was so bad, her friend laughs. He tries to hide it throughout the whole thing, where she’s asking him not to tell the boy.
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Arturo Arias
Really, really avoid doing the same thing with both hands at the same time, like a mirror. If you overlap or just work with one hand, it would look more natural.
James Ham
Not bad, try to improvise more arcs in the arm movements.
Jesse J. Jones
Get those hands out of the neutral pose!! Should also compose your animation so we can read the acting better. Right now there's a lot of empty space around your character. Learn about good composition and animation fundamentals.