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WAIRO KINSHI
The bribe is prohibited
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philipp seis
really nice one :)
Danny Kneip
There are a lot of good things about this entry and it has some great potential. I feel the lip sync is weak but the performances are mostly believable and I am instantly interested in these characters and their relationship. well done.
Aanal Kumar
gestures are awasom!!!!!
Rob Small
Some nice small details (the woman's heavy sigh), but the pointing action by the man doesn't make sense. He goes from calm and in control to seemingly apprehensive and then back to calm again (waving his hand dismissively). It's not very clear.
Edward Chris Evjen
Stage the examining of the envelope to break the silhouette.
Sean McDonald
Hand movements on opening the letter and putting in his pocket are really natural. Nice!
Jesse J. Jones
The floaty cam is distracting and takes away from the otherwise good animation! :)
Jacob Scamell
The staging is off, the actions is lost in the scene for the most part. Needs to be more exaggerated or change the staging.
Sergio Barragan L
great idea!
Avinash Kharat
great one