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Therapy

by Beau Johnson

Final Rating: 3.82. Finished #123 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

Beau Johnson

Experience

2 months of experience

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

A therapist discovers an unlikely secret about his new patient.

Comments

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Stafford Ahartz

The staging is so strange. Zoom in on the character. It'll improve the performance.

Clement

When the foot comes up, the entire body should shift with it's unbalanced weight, it's a good start though. Add some rythm, weight and a more thorough lips animation and you're good to go!

Jesse J. Jones

Composition leaves a lot of empty space. Animation is also pretty floaty.

Menga Nkouka

The gesture of the character is interesting and quite expressive but it would have been nice if the camera had a move or several cuts in the animation to see the character from different angles