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Blackmail

by Cory Parks

Final Rating: 4.03. Finished #111 out of 197 entries.

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Animator

Cory Parks

Experience

not much

Time Taken

4 weeks

Description

The fate of his imagination rests with a fish.

Comments

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Jesse J. Jones

The scared take is pretty swimmy. Try practicing what it would be like to be startled like that. Most people wouldn't raise their arms like that. :)

Jack Kimberley

your idea is clearly presented, but the movements need to be faster and more natural

Bailey Easson

The context given to the dialogue is clever! So good job there. The animation could be smoother, but overall job well done.

Noyan Özkan

well, this was a good idea.