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Surprise Witness
Description
A wrongfully accused suspect holds the truth from the real criminal whom he has feelings for.
Comments
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Jack Kimberley
The lighting is nice and it's a good effort, but the context of the scene isn't very clear and some of the movement seems a bit unnatural.
donna
The wavy arms don't translate so well for me but really like the start! :)
Jesse J. Jones
The movement around frame 160 seems strange. Work on simplifying your poses.