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Legendary Painting
by Gary
Description
Malcolm is working on his own painting, and a girls comes in to look at his work, and then gives some critiques.
Comments
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Nathan Greensmith
Entertaining, good walk animation from frame 270.
Francisca Zamorano
awesome final :D congrats
Sarah Johnson
It's kind of weird to me that she's entering the scene as she says the first line because the dialogue sounds like there was conversation before it. Also, I'm not sure what she's doing with his shoulder towards the end? Good start though, this could be an interesting one to finish later.
Ren
Everything has a floatyness to it.