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Happy Endings?

by Temidayo Odunlami

Final Rating: 4.53. Finished #74 out of 167 entries.

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Experience

1 year's worth

Time Taken

1 month

Description

Two people on a blind date playfully argue on if the guy is getting lucky tonight. The guy, Bobby, is confident he will, and the woman, Alex, is playfully calling him out on his confidence.

Comments

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Nathan Greensmith

I feel we are a little to far away from the characters to see whats going on and its a bit floaty but I think its good.

Ezra Allen

Pretty cool. I would put the camera a lot closer because for the 11 second club the resolution is small and your losing lots of detail.

Hanne Dewachter

I like his little pointing move on the "I know", it's a nice touch, but I miss expression in the woman's face. Or rather, I don't feel like the expression she has fits the sound of her voice. But not bad!