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lap_dialog
by humo
Description
Tow students try to solve problem and they failed and need more research
Comments
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Nathan Greensmith
bit floaty, some decisive key poses would be nice. But its ok.
Eric Raffle
it didn't look like she was talking and you needed a stronger storyline
Kerry Kirkpatrick
Try having more extreme poses