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Argument
Nicholas Thorson
A Man and his wife are arguing about his finger. He doesn't think it's infected but she does.
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Nathan Greensmith
Very floaty. Not too sure what they are meant to be doing.
Brian Paquette
It seems like they have no idea what they're doing with their hands, so they're just kind of floating all over the place. Recording yourself delivering the dialogue would give you some clear ideas for acting choices.
Hanne Dewachter
.. This looks really very odd. Are they floating?
Catherine Albu
Their movements are very floaty - try to make them keep each pose a little longer, instead of immediately going to the next pose. Also, don't make them move for the sake of moving! It's okay if they stay still every once in a while. Every movement needs to bring something to the acting, otherwise it's very cluttered and hard to read.