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The fight
It's my first animation and next time i'll try to do better work.
It takes under 10 days to be completed.
It's a little fight between a husband and a wife.
Husband is kind of jolly nature and wife is a serious one so they have an argument.
Comments
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Mag Magnet
I liked the concept and the asymmetrical facial expressions! The lip sync does seem a bit off at times, though.
Nathan Greensmith
Lip sync is ok, timing needs work.
Hanne Dewachter
Your choice of lip movements is pretty odd. It's very over-acted. Try looking in a mirror for lip sync references, it helps a lot. Now it looks like they are doing a lot of "bleeblee bleeBLOOPbaabeeMOO" :D
david
funy concept, and love the ligthing maybe the camera is a little crazy. overall godd work.
Kerry Kirkpatrick
Pay closer attention to the lips and the shape they make to different sounds.
Ren
Your blowing out you ranges to soon on his mouth. I would make it mouth open less on what hes not emphasizing.