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sith is not wrong
by Donovan Luch
Description
a lightsabre battle
Comments
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Nathan Greensmith
Lacks fundamentals but is fun.
Hanne Dewachter
Your characters are very stiff.. If you want to go for a full blown action scene (which, honestly, doesn't really fit this soundbite) you're going to have to have your characters' whole body move. Don't limit movement to the limbs. But keep practicing.
Davit Martirosyan
WTF?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Kerry Kirkpatrick
It's missing a sense of weight to your characters movements.