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by Shawn Gilmer

Final Rating: 2.35. Finished #156 out of 167 entries.

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Animator

Shawn Gilmer

Experience

little

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

This was the 4th animation I have ever made, and I had fun for the time frame I had to work on it, and I want to get better.

Comments

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Eric Raffle

you need better motion at one point the guy comes in way too fast and then the girl goes into slow motion, you need to learn better execution

Ezra Allen

Did he come in on a skateboard?

Kerry Kirkpatrick

Everything is rlly floaty. Try adding weight!