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my first animation
i am an animation student i know this entry of mine in this may competition is not so good , so i would like to have comments or critique to my work and i want to know on what things i have to work on to enhance my animation
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Devin Stewart
Good practice. This would benefit a lot from more dynamic characters. Animate the root!
Lee Bird
you should move the camera so there isn't so much empty space overhead
James Trimm
mouth is very popping
John
If the eyebrows and mouth did jump from position to position like they do, it would make this much better. Nice ending pose btw \m/ (-_-) \m/
Timothy Muller
Hi there. My advice for you is to strengthen your contact poses. Practice contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep the good work up. Cheers.
Scott
Not a bad start. Your eyebrows move a lot. Watch yourself or someone else talking and pay attention to how often eyebrows move. Sometimes less is more. Decent start though.