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Syrio Forel

by Fahmi Nasir

Final Rating: 3.86. Finished #74 out of 205 entries.

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Animator

Fahmi Nasir

Experience

8 year

Time Taken

not enough time

Description

Arya's sword-fighting teacher

Comments

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Blond

Oh wow, I'm not used seeing 60 fps animation here

James Trimm

The parts when they're standing on the ground flat are best. Transitions, like the step down, have to have enough time and also follow through rather than stopping completely:)

Timothy Muller

Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also make sure you remember your character's center of gravity and how it shifts, and check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!

Scott

There are some weird frames at 334 & 473 where it pops.

Noyan Özkan

oh my... 60 fps?