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Not A mage
Description
A young mage and his new master in....something
Comments
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Timothy Muller
Hello there. My advice for you is to experiment with camera angles. The first shot is quite far, and the second far too close. Also try improving your contact poses. They establish everything in the shot and, in greatest form, able to tell the entire story by themselves (comics for example). Keep up the work.
Eric Raffle
cant see anything
Lucy Acland
We need more in betweens.