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The Dancer
by Robert
Description
The boy has no idea he's has dancing lessons.
Comments
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Timothy Muller
Hello. My advice to you is improve upon your acting choices (I don't get why the teacher kicks at 30-47 for example). Check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators." It's a fantastic read with a ton of references.
I would also say to try improving your contact poses, however your characters are limited by their lack of spinal flexibility (tell them to go to the gym for me).
Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Kendra Kaye Coffey
very nice old school Claymation styled work! the end pose with the dancing master was really nice.