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by Peerapong Pipatpan

Final Rating: 7.10. Finished #5 out of 205 entries.

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Experience

3 years

Time Taken

1 week

Description

A young boy meets his dancing master at the first time.

Comments

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Lee Nam

top 5!

Nate

You really nailed the poses in this one. The animation was also superbly smooth. I love the way the turtle gulps as the monster gets close to him. Feels very natural. This is definitely in my top 3!

Blond

nice animation but the acting needs more work...

Lauren Hammond

I'm confused but like in a good way haha! Could be cool if master didn't start dancing until right when he says the line, to add more suspense

John

I like it! Lip sync needs some work. When he says, "... late, boy!" there is a small separation between the two words, and your character looks like he's slurring the two, at least to me. When he says, "Tomorrow..." you left out the 'm'.

narendra sawant

good work

Liam

Looks great! The only thing I would pick out is that the master's dancing at the end, as it's very stop-start and rhythmic, doesn't quite seem to marry up with the smooth delivery of the last line.

Timothy Muller

I like it! Some of the monster's lip sync gets lost ("boy," "tomorrow," and "master" specifically). Your characters overall have fun acting and an attractive energy. Keep up the great work.

Grégoire Vion Miyamoto

the ending sucks

John Toland

And this is the winner. great opening

Robert Firestone

This is a nice piece. I think you could dial back the squash and stretch a bit on the turtle.

Satya

Nice..

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui

this is may be in top 6

Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan

Amazing shot man! nice appeal and line of actions and I adore how you work the bits specially when says " mid day"!!!, really good one of the best and hope you win!

Ruth Agada

I love the expressions.

kpwale1

winner