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Dancing master
student came late in class. and dance master got shouted.
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Danny Kneip
Amusing dance moves. Lip sync needs polishing.
Kazi Abu Bakkar Chisty
very good rendering quality.
Timothy Muller
Hello there. My biggest pieces of advice for you is playing with your timing and lip sync. Certain bits are too slow or late (30-50 with the teacher saying "You) and the facial detail can be pushed more (all of "Who are you?" and the teacher's lips for "Your dancing master").
Overall, I enjoyed your piece. Keep up the good work.
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Jonathan Guthauser
That's pretty good, just the right foot on the end who stay put in the same place which is not quite right. The way he moves I think he's right foot will move slightly. But good job.
Emily
I love the little dance at the end. The movements looked nice with good settles and timing. maybe push the annoyed look at the beginning and add in more arcs in the hands. I really enjoy this and I look forward to seeing more.
James Trimm
I feel his eyes aren't dynamic enough maybe.