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New Asst Coach
by Paul Von
Sara finally decides to try out for the school football team. The reception was not what she expected...
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Danilo Passos
Animation is all floating
Timothy Muller
Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!
James Trimm
The arms in particular are very floaty... try to move them to pose to pose with little bounce/ follow through rather than completely stopping... (if that makes sense:D)?
Lucy Acland
There's something there, but the characters are moving too slowly. They don't feel real.