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little big master
Description
an elephant waits for his dancing teacher and gets a huge surprise!
Comments
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Timothy Muller
The prey mantis? NO! The prey DANCE-TIS!
Fun concept! My biggest advice is tighten your timing. The mantis landing is a bit off, the coconut at the beginning falls at an equal speed, etc. Also, experiment creating stronger contact poses. The elephant's center of gravity at the end is way off (it's dancing, not ventriloquy).
Overall, I liked watching this. Keep up the work.
Kendra Kaye Coffey
I felt it needed to be pushed more. More lip-syncing, more frames.