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Dojo Mojo
A boy walks into his new training room.
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Joshua Farmer
I like this a lot, the only issue I had was when the camera cuts from the boy to the dancing master sitting down. Just seemed a little weird to me, but still awesome! great environment and face animation!
James Trimm
all very good, not mad on the ending gesture:(
Bradley Adams
Really like the way you interpreted the audio as a spit. Lip sync is nice and fluid, the initial walk could have been better, good scene shots too, overall 8/11
John
As weird as this is to say, I liked the spitting! I didn't hear it that way at before, but it works. I have one issue with the lip sync. The "dancing master" has trouble with his Ys. Whenever he says something that ends in "y" his mouth stays open. It seemed intentional on your part, and it was kinda funny, but overall it just looked wrong. Nothing other than that, so good job :)
Timothy Muller
Hello there. My only pieces of advice are of minor posing and weight. I feel that the student is a bit soft and jittery in shot 2. Make sure to also show weight shifts in his hips as he walks in, and the teacher when standing up.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed watching this. Keep up the good work.