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Dancing Master

by Timothy Muller

Final Rating: 4.97. Finished #39 out of 205 entries.

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Animator

Timothy Muller

Experience

Less than 1 year.

Time Taken

40 hours, concept to rendering.

Description

The master has chosen his next pupil.

Comments

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Devin Stewart

the end pose needs a little more settle, it seems like it just stops, and then starts again slowly.

Joshua Farmer

I like it all, that last camera move is WILD... but it works I think. Fun idea and I like the reaction the master has after being questioned.

Stephen Bester

Hold poses more solidly. Use FK arms. Use bigger mouth shapes.

Lewis van der Werf

Funny, but needs better timing and breakdowns that provide nice arcs.

James Trimm

More movement in the eyes (and eyebrows) , they're pretty still mostly?

Jordan Barg

A bit choppy at parts, but overall great! I think you got good performance in the boy compared to most people, feels natural, slide reveal at the end is great.