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11 Second Club May Submission
by Seth
Description
Made and rendered in Maya, big thanks to animation school and CGTarian for the use of the Ray and Malcom rig.
Comments
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HiNA
The facial expression on the baker is amazing! but besides that everything feels really lacking. You should take more attention into corporal expression and timing- feels like they're moving underwater and its only a matter of ease in/out. Put as much care as you did in the baker's expression and you'll go long places!
Ruben Uggla
While the movements feel a little bit floaty it's still kinda good.
Gabriel
floaty...
make movements faster, stay longer in poses