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Norman Dying
Description
This is my second entry. Hope you like the Norman character.
Comments
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Wai Han Lau
the animation is good! However, I feel you need stronger poses and silhouettes. (the spine feels a bit stiff, maybe he could slump with exasperation?) Also, think about varying some speed in your movements - adding contrast will make the piece more interesting. Overall, it is good - keep going!