Cannedguy

Richard Adams

A strange one. Difficult one to rate. Staging problem. Showing only hands and arms hurts this a lot. I understand you want to hide the can until the end as a punch line reveal--but wish you had at least shown the man's head and pulled the camera back more, leave the talking can offscreen until the reveal.

Maria Robertson

Interesting idea but you repeat the same gestures over and over again and it gets boring

Ruben Uggla

Funny idea. My only critique is that I don't think the hand motions fit what the characters are saying that well.

Jacinta Joe

Some really nice hand shapes in there!

Shiladitto Gupto

The concept is good but needs good execution..

C h o c o b i l l y

The camera shots before the reveal are the best. is a great idea that needs a lot of polish. This can be great. Probably can scrap the literal "can" for a chef. though i think well animated hands and dough would suffice.