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Dying Baker
by Es
Can always work more on animation, used maybe a week on render with Arnold render in Maya.
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Jason Weilee
Animation is good, but the head on the table felt too dramatic for the dialogue.
Lucky Brown
Haha, Nice acting choice. Good job man!
Ruben Uggla
Really well animated. He moves perhaps bit too much in the beginning but still really well animated. I would also have liked if he had more of an impact when he hit the table but thats just me being picky. His body doesn't feel floaty and I think the facial expressions are fantastic.
Richard Adams
His flopping down on the countertop when he says "dying" is way over-exaggerated, to the point where it loses believability. Moves well otherwise.
Meike
I think this would have worked better if the countertop (that he bangs his head on) would have already been on screen. other than that, great job :)
Laurent Châtellier
Haha ! nice stuff.