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Day in the Park
by Jacinta Joe
Animated in Maya.
Comments
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Lucky Brown
Could improve on the poses. push it more.
Wai Han Lau
the movements are really good, I especially like the guy picking at a pea at the beginning! I would say the staging for the 2nd shot needs a lot of work, maybe a slight zoom whilst he's talking so we focus on the baker more? Also, have a look at moving his body a bit more - just to make the piece more interesting to look at.
Shiladitto Gupto
Needs improvement in timing it looks floaty.. make it tighter.. poses are fine..
Pk kub
Good.
Meike
nice job on the lipsync :)
shawn
Nice lip sync work!
Fabia Fuchs
I love the calm way in which the story is being told. No unnecessary movements in the main character and just focus on the facials and language. Nice timing. Really good!
And I absolutely love the way the first guy throws the bread crumb!