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The Record

by Petr J.

Final Rating: 5.65. Finished #31 out of 102 entries.

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Animator

Petr J.

Experience

6 years

Time Taken

a lot of evenings after baby fell asleep (~18 hours)

Description

analyzing a record…

Comments

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Herr Pink

I feel like you can do better, because there is some solid movement there, but not having a secondary character was a bit of a cop-out. Not enough time?

Oggie

nicely done however i feel like there is an issue with the lip sync. i recommend Aaron Blaise's animation tutorial where he animated the bear speaking a line from On Golden Pond. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xYmxAfsvINA

Andrei Llacuna

Exaggerate the facial expression especially the mouth to give it a bit of life to the animation.

Shreyas Dutta

good

Myrel Talbaje