« Back to May 2018 Competition
take over earth
Description
An alien has ambitions of taking over earth.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Alan Leppen
The glow effect on the sun and the floor is a little too bright.
Brian Duffy
the whole point of the dialogue is he's talking about him after the fact. doesn't make sense for him to deliver the line while still standing right next to him
Petr J.
Hands are floating a bit. Be careful about arcs on the IK hands :)
Niharika
Timing needs improvement and the Sun is way too bright and distracting
Pallav Sharma
flouty