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A wanted man

by Jamie F

Final Rating: 7.19. Finished #7 out of 86 entries.

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Animator

Jamie F

Experience

8 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

He's looking for answers and won\t stop until he gets them.

Comments

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Macarena Santillan

It's not very clear that the man is talking to the woman until she responds. Other than that the animation is looking pretty solid.

Victor Pierce

Excellent performances, especially when the guy starts crossing his arms! I love the subtle finger movement when he says "What do they got?"

sandeepkumargoje

nice one

abdul.ahm

nice acting , good luck

Fred

The woman should have a little more subtle motion in her torso when she is listening. Even just have her breathing. Slight head motion with the eye darts; shoulders relaxing.

Steve Reach

I like the old film grain filter you used, it adds a cool effect. If he's talking to the woman, we lose the connection as he doesn't address her or look at her while speaking the first line.
I like the arm folding and the eye darts. Nice work.

kim son mi

good!!!

MarutiYemul

when she say police looking for u... if she goes more forward to his face...its add more fun...
Output and acting is really nice..