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11 second

by arely

Final Rating: 2.95. Finished #68 out of 86 entries.

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Animator

arely

Experience

i'm garbage

Time Taken

a month

Description

a guy and a girl get spicy.

Comments

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Pallav Sharma

learn basics of body mechanics lead and follow srong pose first arcs cusion settel follow through etc etc

Macarena Santillan

Key poses and actions are good, I really like her fiddling with the glasses. Movements are too fast and dont have time to settle.

Diane Aarts

Try to limit poses to one key pose per phrase, it's tempting to do one for every word or accent but it's too busy that way. Try to move the whole torso as well, moving just the arms and head will look robotic