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office girls
by lu bai
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Exchange of office girls.
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Kyra Simone
LOVE the loudness of these character's expressions! These fit the voice clip so much. Your keys are great, but you need to work on what comes between them. Study up on arcs and when to slow an action after it's finished. Also, the first scene ended a little quickly. End the movement before the scene!
Luna Leandro
Very choppy and also they move too much