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My Second Entry

by Rachael Ogunbowale

Final Rating: 3.57. Finished #102 out of 201 entries.

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Experience

Almost 2 years

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

Here's my second entry in this competition. Hope you enjoy.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Caitlin Carpenter

Nice job getting the animation. This shot would improve if one of the characters were flipped so that they're facing each other.

Kyra Simone

Real smooth transitions between poses btwn 55 and 222, but the poses themselves need to be more defined otherwise.

Luna Leandro

Has potential, but referencing live action would beniefit the acting. The poses are a bit weird and the timing is off. Also it feels like it has too many unecessary inbetweens, specially at the "hey hey hey" and "really sorry" bits.

Lola Robey-Levine

Lipsync is on point, just wish there was more development in the posing