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Office stories
by Zhaoyawen
Two people in the office.A was angry because of too many tasks. At this time, B comforted A, but A was angry and B didn't know the reason why he quarreled with A. Finally, A had no choice but to leave.
Comments
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Abraham Mohotsi
It just seems like an image collage
Animatical
It keeps changing and I have no idea what I'm looking at!
Jonathan Fontaine
Hey hey hey !
Slow down a bit !
Serioulsy though, try to use 1 or max 2 camera angle and staging .. leave the action a nd movemant to the characters
(Nice color palette )
Caitlin Carpenter
The drawings are very pleasing to me, but their are too many different angles used. You should try to not jump around as much next time.
Poppy Marlow
there is waay too much going on
Parker Rodormer
Too many jump cuts, but I like the style.
Aaron Clement
Too many camera angles. It's a bit disorienting.
C h o c o b i l l y
Too many camera cuts.
bhanu g
i feel there are too many camera changes...try to keep it simpler..so that the story can be understood..rightnow im not even sure whats going on