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Unnecessary Attitude

by Gültekin Karaoğlan

Final Rating: 6.42. Finished #13 out of 201 entries.

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Experience

10 years

Time Taken

2 days

Description

Thanx for the competition 11 Sec ;)

Tags
2D

Comments

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Richard Adams

For the most part, this is superb. Except for the weird squashy-stretchy heads the first 70 frames or so, as if they were water balloons rather than containing a rigid skull inside.

John M

Nice

Aaron James Mongcopa

nice Flash style animation!!!

Paul Essenhigh

Nice!

Aaron Clement

I love the guy and the ending. Maybe a bit much up and down on the girl in the walk (feels a bit wobbly).

Ying Herng Chia

A bit confused by the girl's happy expression at the start; thought she sounded frustrated in the dialogue.
Boy's eye line should be higher in last shot to be looking at girl's face.

Jaime Santana

Cute cute.

Jamie F

nice

Lola Robey-Levine

This is really nice overall, the only thing that stuck out was the girl's expression at the start felt like it didn't match the tone of the line