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Unexpected Text

by Matt

Final Rating: 4.83. Finished #41 out of 201 entries.

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Animator

Matt

Experience

4 years of schooling

Time Taken

22 hours over the past month.

Description

Two friends go out for brunch, then one gets an unexpected text.

This is my first animation in two years since I graduated.

Comments

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Jessica Castillo

I like the acting on the first girl but the second girl feels very stiff. It would help if you animated her body and right arm a little more, not just the head and left arm. Not bad though!

Kathryn Ross

character #2 needs body movement.

Jonathan Fontaine

great convincing acting on the first lady !
Second onr lack emotional involvment..(body language is held back too much)

Adam O

I actually like this a lot!